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Stop, now, I’m losing control
I’m standing here, feeling the thunder roll
Far off, the skies’ distance
Fueled by the power of my resistance
From these feelings inside
To the lies that I can’t subside
Turn away, don’t look at me
Give me a taste of your misery

Ignorance allows me a break
From the smile you so earnestly fake
Am I the culprit of your depression
Just as you are the object of my affection?
Face me so I can see you
Your heart pulses through
Rapid now, much too fast
Take confidence in that this won’t last

They say love is kind
That a gentle smile can heal the mind
Your love for her is your soul’s ascension
My love for you only stirs dissention
If I could treat you much better than she
If you could only accept me
©2006-2009 ~PurpleTallest
:iconpurpletallest:

Author's Comments

I wrote this about the only boy that's ever caught my eye romantically. This, personally, is one of my best works, and critique is highly encouraged. I only want to get better.

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:iconzenirixwolf:
You showed me this, and you know how amazed I am...

I envy your literaturary skills. o.o


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Just a bit explosive...
:iconpurpletallest:
Hehe, thanks.

You can draw, though. ^^

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this is our secret place [outer space, outer space]
:iconpurpletallest:
thank you. (:

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this is our secret place [outer space, outer space]
:iconsanoon:
Ohh, nicer. Heh-heh. Again with the well written verses. Amazing!

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This review has been Gandhi approved!
:iconpoetika:
This is a great poem, the feelings in it are just so universal

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